It sounds like a racing game's "select your character/car" theme.
A little bit catchy, isn't repetitive, and is easy-listening(smooth, ambient).
Somewhat repetitious, generic, and little separates it from other techno submissions. "Apple Fruit" is an idea you went with, and finished, but ultimately failed.
However, I can tell from your composing that the talent/ability is there. And subsequently, most of your music is superior to this. It was simply a simple case of hit-and-miss.
something tossed togethin in 3 hours that lasted 1.25 min
It bears a resemblance to "Bomberman Hero" music.
For those who aren't aware, Bomberman Hero is a game for the Nintendo 64 that had(and still does) a very popular and original soundtrack, most of which is ambient music.
The approach is new, it sounds adequate. But a few sections appear slightly rough/scratchy.
Simple, efficient, fits the theme(death).
At a current score of 2, this song is highly undervalued.
It's a competent 8-bit remix of "Box 15", certainly no less.
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